You work for an international company. You have seen an advertisement for a training course which will be useful for your job. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter: - describe the training course you want to do - explain what the company could do to help you - say how the course will be useful for your job
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Dear Mrs Margarita, I am writing this letter to express my interest in attending an important training course called ‘Introduction to Advanced Supply Chain Management System’ after coming across its advertisement in one of our local newspapers last week.
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Dear Mr Thompson, I am writing to seek your kind approval to enrol in a Project Management Certification Course, which I recently came across in an advertisement. Given its relevance to my role, I believe it would significantly enhance my efficiency at work.
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Dear Mr Raynold, I am writing about a training course titled "Importance of Digital Presence for Global Expansion of Business", that was advertised in a daily newspaper on 14th October. I believe it would be helpful for me and hope to get your permission to participate in it.