Should creative artists be given freedom in their work like pictures, novels, films or the government should certain restrictions on their work?
Sample Response
Undoubtedly, some peoplepersons are gifted with specific skills in different creative fieldsdifferent fields of society. They gain recognitionthey get name and fame by producing exceptional workgiving extraordinary creations to the society. Different people are well verseddifferent people have well versed with unique skills whether it is writing, painting or cinematography. Therethere should be some limitations to their work but to a limited extent. I disagree thatI disagree with it that the authorities should put restrictions on their work.restrictions on their work. Should creative artists be given freedom in their work like pictures, novels
Firstly, they should have the freedom to do their work with focusconcentration and dedication because the constitution gives them the rightthe constitution has given the right to express feelings. they reflect their hidden talent through these creations and it will not only gives them popularity but enhance the economy of the country also. they become the center of attraction by showing their capabilities and tourists will be attracted toward the nation to have a glimpse of their work.glimpse of their work. Should creative artists be given freedom in their work like pictures, novels
Furthermore, if the government putsif the government will put restrictions on their creations then they will not be able to do their work in a proper way. famous artist Sobha Singh who is the source of everybody’s attraction came out with bright colors in the field of painting and people even from the foreign country comes to see his paintings. moreover, people in this modern era are mature enough to see the positive and negative aspectspositive or negative side of the work. that’s why the government should let the artists pursue their workdo their business without any scrutiny because they are the pride of the nation and everyone should be proud of them.proud of them. Should creative artists be given freedom in their work like pictures, novels
To cap it all, constraints put the burden on their occupation and art is something that has no boundaries. artists should have the right to expressexplore themselves freely because they become role models for the new generation.new generation. Should creative artists be given freedom in their work like pictures, novels
Why this response received Band 5.5
The response offers a recognisable position and some relevant support, particularly the attempt to explain artistic freedom through rights, tourism, and a named example. However, the stance is partly contradictory, development is uneven, and repeated fragments copied from the task severely interrupt the essay, while frequent grammar and collocation errors reduce control. The priority is to remove the repeated prompt text, clarify the exact degree of restriction supported, and build each reason in accurate sentences.
IELTS Writing Criteria Scores
Task Response
The response addresses artistic freedom and gives supporting reasons, but its position on limited restrictions conflicts with its later rejection of restrictions.
State one precise position on acceptable restrictions and develop each reason without repeating language from the task.
Coherence and Cohesion
Basic paragraphing and progression are visible, but repeated prompt fragments disrupt continuity and linking is mechanical.
Delete every repeated task fragment and connect sentences through clear logical relationships rather than stock transitions.
Lexical Resource
There is some topic-related range, but frequent repetition and awkward word combinations limit accuracy and flexibility.
Use more natural collocations for artistic work, public recognition, and regulation, while avoiding repeated vocabulary.
Grammatical Range and Accuracy
Meaning remains generally accessible, but frequent errors in capitalization, agreement, verb forms, and conditionals weaken control.
Check every sentence for a capitalized opening, correct subject-verb agreement, and accurate conditional verb forms.
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IELTS Writing Task 2
Should creative artists be given freedom in their work like pictures, novels, films or the government should certain restrictions on their work?
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