Many feel that students today should learn practical skills at school such as car maintenance and managing a bank account. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Sample Response
Some believe that useful life skills should be taught inat schools in addition to the standard academic curriculumschedule. In my opinion, school is chiefly an opportunity to learn about academic subjects.
The main argument in favour of learning these skills is self-evident: they are useful. The majority of students graduate from high school well versed in a foreign language, algebra, anatomy, and classicalclassic literature but helpless when confronted with the realities of daily life. Some skills they lack include general car maintenance such as changing the oil or a flat tire, cooking their own meals, managing their finances, and doing odd jobs around the house. The majority of what they learned in school will not be useful in their liveslife and, without attention, will eventually fade from memory. Practical skills, on the other hand, will remain fresh in their mindsstay fresh in their mind due to repeated application and have a more tangible impactmore ostensibly tangible impact.
Nonetheless, practical skills can be learned at home while the best place to learn about academic subjects is school. Many students will learn practical skills for daily lifethe craft of daily life from their familiesfamily or naturally pick it up later. Cooking will not become a daily habit when living at home and the skills are unlikely to resurface intact years later when called upon. In contrast, schools are filled with experts in their fields only available at this time of life. A quality math or history teacher will guide you in a way books alone cannot. The knowledge gained from these expertsThe accumulated knowledge from all these experts may or may not be directly useful but this singular opportunity to learn about a broad range of subjectsa wide breadth of subjects will inform an individual’s long-term intellectual life.
In conclusion, useful subjects are important but should not detract from the true purpose of schooling. Practical skills should be taught at schools only if they can be seamlessly worked into the curriculum and are not detrimental to academics.
Why this response received Band 8.0
The essay sustains a clear, qualified position and develops a persuasive contrast between practical learning and the unique academic opportunities schools provide, with especially strong organisation and grammatical control. A few claims are overstated or slightly unclear, particularly the discussion of cooking and what students retain, which weakens precision. Refine those causal explanations and use one concrete example to make the argument fully convincing.
IELTS Writing Criteria Scores
Task Response
The response answers the extent question directly with a consistent qualified disagreement and develops both the opposing case and its preferred position.
Clarify the cooking example and add a specific illustration of how academic study produces lasting intellectual value.
Coherence and Cohesion
The argument is sequenced clearly, with purposeful paragraphing and well-controlled transitions between concession and rebuttal.
Strengthen the internal link between the home-learning claim and the following cooking example so the reasoning remains immediately transparent.
Lexical Resource
The essay uses a wide and flexible vocabulary with generally precise academic phrasing and natural topic-specific language.
Avoid slightly strained choices such as 'ostensibly tangible' and select wording that states the intended contrast more directly.
Grammatical Range and Accuracy
Complex sentences are varied and handled with strong control, while minor agreement and modifier issues are infrequent and non-impeding.
Polish plural reference in phrases such as 'their life' and ensure modifiers sit next to the nouns they describe.
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IELTS Writing Task 2
Many feel that students today should learn practical skills at school such as car maintenance and managing a bank account. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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