Remote work has become increasingly common in recent years. Some argue this impairs work habits generally. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Sample Response

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Remote work has grown rapidly in recent years, and some critics arguesome people claim this shift has led to declining work discipline and productivitya decline in work discipline and productivity. However, I only partly agree with this view. While remote working can create challenges for some employeesindividuals, it can also improve work habits when appropriate systems are in place and employees take personal responsibilitywhen supported by appropriate systems and personal responsibility. On the one hand, remote work may impairmay negatively affect work habits if employees struggle with self-management. Working from home can blur the boundary between personal and professional life, making it easier for people to bebecome distracted by household responsibilities, social media, or family members. For instance, though people say they can do the laundry or pick up their children more easily whilst remote working, this may end up using time that should be spent working. Without direct supervision, some employees may also find it difficult to stay motivated or structure their days effectivelymaintain motivation or structure their day effectively, which can result in missed deadlines, reduced productivity, or inconsistent working patterns. On the other hand, this working arrangementthis way of work can be beneficial for many people. The absence of commuting saves time and reduces stress, allowing employees to start work earlierbegin their tasks earlier or manage their breaks more efficientlytake breaks more efficiently. Additionally, remote work often requires employees to plan their days more carefully, which can result in improvedenhanced time-management and organisational skills. Many companies also use digital tools to track progress and encourage collaboration, meaning that teamwork and productivity can remain high even without face-to-face interaction. In, I only partly agree with the claim. While remote work can impair work habits in some cases, it does not inevitably do so. The impact depends largely on individual discipline and the support systems provided by employers.

Overall assessment

Why this response received Band 7.5

The response sustains a clear, nuanced position and develops both the risks and benefits of remote work with relevant, specific explanations. Its main limitation is a small cluster of awkward or incomplete expressions, especially at the opening of the conclusion, alongside the lack of visible paragraph breaks. The highest priority is to proofread sentence openings and organise the opposing sides into clearly separated paragraphs.

Band score breakdown

IELTS Writing Criteria Scores

TR

Task Response

8.0
Scoring rule

The essay fully answers the extent question, maintains a consistent partial-agreement position, and supports both sides with relevant causes and consequences.

Next step

Deepen the second side with one more concrete illustration of how employer systems improve remote work habits.

CC

Coherence and Cohesion

7.0
Scoring rule

Ideas follow a clear introduction, balanced discussion, and conclusion, with effective internal progression despite the response appearing as one continuous paragraph.

Next step

Use distinct paragraphs for the disadvantages, advantages, and conclusion, and repair the abrupt concluding transition.

LR

Lexical Resource

7.5
Scoring rule

The response uses a broad and generally precise range of work-related vocabulary, including self-management, direct supervision, and organisational skills.

Next step

Replace awkward phrasing such as this way of work with more natural collocations and check fixed expressions during proofreading.

GRA

Grammatical Range and Accuracy

7.5
Scoring rule

Complex sentences are varied and mostly well controlled, while a few local errors remain noticeable but do not disrupt communication.

Next step

Proofread sentence boundaries and missing words, particularly the malformed opening In, at the start of the conclusion.

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IELTS Writing Task 2

Remote work has become increasingly common in recent years. Some argue this impairs work habits generally. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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