In the past, lectures were the traditional method of teaching large numbers of students in a classroom. Nowadays new technology is increasingly being used to teach students. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this new approach in teaching?

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We have moved into a technology-driven era where technology is affecting many aspectsmany different aspects of our life, and education is no exception. In some schoolsSo, in some schools, traditional methods of education have been revolutionised by new technology to the extent that lectures are no longerthe lecture is no longer the main method of teaching students. While this new approach has some advantages, it also has many significant shortcomings. This essay outlines both the advantages andof disadvantages of this novel approach. ArguablyPerceivably the biggest advantage of the use of the modernlatest technology in education is the flexibility it offers. This is evident in two different ways: firstlyways- firstly, it is Deletenow no longer essential for students to be present in the classroom for their courses. The COVID-19 pandemic has shown usspecifically taught us how this flexibility could be a lifesaver. Moreover, the availability of distance learningthe distance learning facility enables employed professionals, housewives and people from different countries to enrol and successfully completefinish useful courses offered by numerous institutionsinstitutes. Another area of flexibility is of course the interactive tools like "Moodles", for example, the lecturers can use to deliver their courses to large numbers of students. Not everything, however, about the introduction of this new technology into education is useful. To start, not all students are comfortable usingcomfortable with using technology, even if they are part of the digital native generation. This is a grave issue as they may suffer from their lack of technological skills and interests. For instance, almost 75% of studentsan overwhelming number of students, almost 75%, despite their enthusiasm for smartphones and computers, reported that they do not like online classes. Another related issue is that education is a human activity, and it works best with as much human interaction as possible. Impersonal technology cannot replace the human contact found in traditional face-to-face tutorials and seminars. Thus, a pieceThus a piece of technology or tool can never be an alternative to expert tutors who know their students individually and teach them accordinglyact and teach them accordingly. To conclude, technology in education brings many important benefits and makesenables distance learning possible. It also becomes the only way of learning and teaching during lockdowns and pandemics. However, we have to keep in mind that it can be too impersonal for some and discourages others because ofdiscourages others for their lack of technological skills or passion.

Overall assessment

Why this response received Band 7.5

The essay addresses both sides directly and develops a clear, well-organised discussion with relevant explanations and examples. Its main limitation is uneven linguistic precision: several awkward collocations, an unsupported statistic, and a few faulty sentence constructions interrupt an otherwise fluent response. The highest priority is to refine word choice and proofread complex sentences so the strong ideas are presented with consistently natural, accurate language.

Band score breakdown

IELTS Writing Criteria Scores

TR

Task Response

8.0
Scoring rule

Both advantages and disadvantages are fully addressed through relevant, extended ideas and a clear conclusion.

Next step

Make supporting evidence more credible and specific, avoiding an unsubstantiated statistic when a reasoned example would be stronger.

CC

Coherence and Cohesion

7.5
Scoring rule

Information is organised into clear stages with logical progression and generally well-controlled cohesive devices.

Next step

Refine punctuation and links within longer sentences so examples and elaboration connect without run-ons or abrupt transitions.

LR

Lexical Resource

7.0
Scoring rule

Vocabulary is varied and topic-appropriate, though several uncommon choices and collocations sound awkward or imprecise.

Next step

Prefer natural academic combinations and check expressions such as those concerning distance learning, technological skills, and discouragement.

GRA

Grammatical Range and Accuracy

7.0
Scoring rule

The essay uses a wide range of sentence forms with good overall control, but several construction and punctuation errors remain.

Next step

Proofread complex clauses for parallel structure and complementation, particularly constructions such as enable something to happen.

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IELTS Writing Task 2

In the past, lectures were the traditional method of teaching large numbers of students in a classroom. Nowadays new technology is increasingly being used to teach students. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this new approach in teaching?

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