Art classes, like painting and drawing are as important as other subjects, so they should be made compulsory in high school. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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In an era when people are paying more attention to the all‑round development of students, the question of whether art should become a compulsory course since it plays an essential role in people's holistic development has sparked an intense debate. From my perspective, I agree with this viewpoint.
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In an era when people are paying more attention to the all-round development of students, the question of whether art should become a compulsory courses since it plays an essential role in people's holistic development has sparked an intense debate. From my perspective, I disagree with this viewpoint.
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Some people think art subjects such as painting and drawing are as important as other school subjects, so high schools should make them required classes. I mostly agree with this idea, but this rule also causes some problems for students.