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The older generation often holds some traditional ideas on the correct way of life, thoughts and behaviour. Some people think these traditional ideas are not helpful for the young generations to prepare for modern life. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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    Traditional ideas held by the older generation have long been a part of society's fabric, guiding individuals on how to live, think, and behave. However, in the context of a rapidly changing technological world, some argue that these traditional ideas may hinder the younger generation's preparedness for modern life.

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    As the world is rapidly changing in this era of ever-evolving technology, the mindsets of old generations struggle to adapt to the current changes. People from these generations hold firmly to long-established lifestyles and expect the youth to follow them without considering thoroughly how it might trouble them.

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