Today, the majority of children are raised by their grandparents due to the fact that their parents are busy working. To what extent do you think it affects the whole family?
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In the contemporary landscape, a predominant phenomenon is the increasing reliance on grandparents for the upbringing of children, driven by the demanding professional schedules of parents. The shift towards grandparents as primary caregivers has broader implications for the family structure, generating a range of effects that transcend mere convenience.
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In today’s busy world, the cost of living is rising quickly, making it necessary for both parents to work hard to make a living. Parents often put their careers first and continue to work even after having children.
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In the past, one of the parents, usually mother, stay at home for looking after their children. However, with the increase in the career-oriented lifestyle, children had to stay with their grandparents.
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Though women mostly take care of their children in most of the societies, men can also be as good as women in upbringing children. The parenting responsibilities should be equally divided and both father and mother should take care of their children. Write an essay expressing your point of view.
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