Process Diagram

The diagrams below give information about the manufacture of frozen fish pies.

Process diagram for an IELTS Academic Task 1 question about Frozen Fish Pie Production.
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    This diagram shows that there are a number of processes involved in the commercial production of frozen fish pies. The main ingredients consist of fresh salmon, peas and sauce, with sliced potatoes, and they are prepared separately.

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    The pictures illustrate the ingredients that go into a factory-made fish pie, and the various steps in its production. The pie contains salmon, peas, sauce and potatoes, and there are ten stages in its manufacture, from delivery to dispatch.

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