Process Diagram

The diagram below shows how coffee is produced and prepared for sale in supermarkets and shops.

Process diagram for an IELTS Academic Task 1 question about Instant Coffee Production Process.
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  1. Band 5.5
    Task Achievement
    Band 5.5
    Coherence and Cohesion
    Band 5.5
    Lexical Resource
    Band 5.5
    Grammatical Range and Accuracy
    Band 5.0

    The diagram illustrates the procedure of coffee production for sale. Diagram describes the different steps following for the process of preparation for sale.

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  2. Band 7.0
    Task Achievement
    Band 7.0
    Coherence and Cohesion
    Band 7.0
    Lexical Resource
    Band 6.5
    Grammatical Range and Accuracy
    Band 6.5

    The diagram shows the information about the packaging and preparation of coffee for sale. Overall, it can be seen that the given diagram involves 11 steps.

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