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The table below presents the number of children ever born to women aged 40-44 years in Australia for each year the information was collected since 1981.

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  1. Band 5.5
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    Band 5.5
    Coherence and Cohesion
    Band 6.0
    Lexical Resource
    Band 5.5
    Grammatical Range and Accuracy
    Band 5.0

    The table graph explicates the gathered statistics of children born to women aged from 40-44 years in Australia. The data is given since 1981 and it illustrates the figures of 1981, 1986, 1996 and 2006.

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  2. Band 6.0
    Task Achievement
    Band 6.0
    Coherence and Cohesion
    Band 6.0
    Lexical Resource
    Band 6.0
    Grammatical Range and Accuracy
    Band 5.5

    The given data shows the number of children born to 40-44 years old women in Australia for 4 different years.

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