You live in rented accommodation which was recently damaged due to the bad weather. Write a letter to the landlord. In your letter: - explain what caused the damage - why you need him/her to fix the problem right away - what needs to be done to fix it
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Dear Mr Noah, I hope this letter finds you in good health and spirit. I am a tenant at your Yorkshire Apartment Residence, and writing this letter with regard to extensive damages that were caused to my apartment last night because of a bad storm.
- Band 7.0View annotated correction →
- Task Achievement
- Band 8.0
- Coherence and Cohesion
- Band 6.5
- Lexical Resource
- Band 6.5
- Grammatical Range and Accuracy
- Band 6.0
Dear Mr Albert, I am Rebecca Paula, a tenant at your Park View Residence, writing to let you know that last night's storm broke a couple of windows at my apartment and those need to be fixed immediately. I reside in flat 4B2 on the eighth floor with my family for the last one and a half years.