Formal Letter

You live in a room in the college hostel which has severe problems. You would like to move into another room and need your hostel super's permission for that. Write a letter to the hostel super. In your letter: - introduce yourself - describe the problems - explain what type of room you would prefer

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    Coherence and Cohesion
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    Band 6.5
    Grammatical Range and Accuracy
    Band 6.5

    Dear Sir or Madam, My name is Aaron Johnson, and I have been living at one of the Trinity college hostels for almost 6 months. My room number is 241, and I share it with another student.

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