Semi-Formal Letter

You are going on a short course to a training college abroad. It is a college that you have not been to before. Write a letter to the accommodation officer. In your letter: - give details of your course and your arrival/departure date - explain your accommodation needs - ask for information about getting to and from the college

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    Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to inform you that I will be attending the Advanced Life Insurance course, being held from Tuesday 24th April until 27th April, at the University of Hartford. I will be arriving on the afternoon of Monday 23th and will be leaving on the morning of Saturday the 28th of April, so I will require a single room for this time.

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    Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing this letter to request you to provide me additional information about your College hostel as I am looking forward to staying in your hostel accommodation owing to my tourism course. To furnish you with more details, I have taken a diploma in tourism and development in the prestigious college of Edinburg for this fall.

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