One of your friends recently had a birthday celebration, but you missed it and you forgot to tell your friend that you couldn't attend. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: - apologise for missing the birthday celebration - explain why you missed it and why you didn't - tell your friend and say what you would like to do to show that you are sorry Dear..................,
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- Coherence and Cohesion
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Dear Benjamin, Hope you are enjoying your life and your newly-found career. But, before anything else, please allow me to apologize to you first since I couldn’t attend your birthday.
- Band 7.0View annotated correction →
- Task Achievement
- Band 7.5
- Coherence and Cohesion
- Band 7.0
- Lexical Resource
- Band 7.0
- Grammatical Range and Accuracy
- Band 6.5
Dear Pollock, I'm so sorry that I missed your birthday party and I hope you are not mad at me. I was so excited to have been invited to your birthday and I even had plans for the occasion.