A friend who lives in a different city has invited you to his/her daughter's 8th birthday. However, you can not accept the invitation due to some personal reasons. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter: - thank him/her for the invitation - mention why you can not attend the birthday party - offer to meet him/her some other day
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- Band 8.0View annotated correction →
- Task Achievement
- Band 8.5
- Coherence and Cohesion
- Band 7.5
- Lexical Resource
- Band 7.5
- Grammatical Range and Accuracy
- Band 7.5
Dear Finch, It's so good to hear from you, and thank you so much for taking the trouble to invite me to your daughter’s birthday party which is to be held on the 9th of August, only a few days away from now. I can’t really believe that your daughter is already 8 years old when it actually feels like she was born only a few years ago!
- Band 7.5View annotated correction →
- Task Achievement
- Band 8.0
- Coherence and Cohesion
- Band 6.5
- Lexical Resource
- Band 8.0
- Grammatical Range and Accuracy
- Band 7.5
Dear Wilson, It was great to hear from you, and I’m really surprised that Diana has already turned eight! It sounds as if she has grown so fast.