You have recently changed your job and started working for a new company. Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter: - explain why you have changed your previous job - describe your new job - tell him/her your other news
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Dear Jane, Hope you're doing well. It's been so long since I've heard from you.
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- Task Achievement
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- Coherence and Cohesion
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- Grammatical Range and Accuracy
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Dear Richard, I hope you're doing great. I wanted to share some exciting news with you - I have recently started a new job, and I'm really enjoying the change.
- Band 7.5View annotated correction →
- Task Achievement
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- Coherence and Cohesion
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- Lexical Resource
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Dear Jane, Hope you're doing well. It's been so long since I've heard from you.
- Band 7.0View annotated correction →
- Task Achievement
- Band 8.0
- Coherence and Cohesion
- Band 7.0
- Lexical Resource
- Band 7.0
- Grammatical Range and Accuracy
- Band 6.5
Dear Angela, I hope you and your family are doing fine, and I’m sorry I haven’t been in touch with you recently. I’m writing to let you know that I've resigned from my previous company and took a new job recently.
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- Task Achievement
- Band 8.0
- Coherence and Cohesion
- Band 7.0
- Lexical Resource
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- Grammatical Range and Accuracy
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Dear James, I hope this letter finds you and your family well. I'm sorry that I couldn't write to you for the last couple of months.
- Band 7.0View annotated correction →
- Task Achievement
- Band 8.0
- Coherence and Cohesion
- Band 6.5
- Lexical Resource
- Band 7.0
- Grammatical Range and Accuracy
- Band 7.0
Dear Kathy, Hope you are doing well. It's been a long since we have last met.