You are a student at a language school in New Zealand studying Business English. Part of the course is a summer work placement programme. Unfortunately, you have just learnt from the school that this programme has now been cancelled. Write a letter to the School Principal. In your letter: - state your reason for writing - describe the problem and your concerns - explain what you would like the Principal to do.
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Dear Mr Scheer, I am writing this letter to express my deep disappointment with the news that the work placement programme has been cancelled this summer. One of the main reasons I chose to study Business English at your school in July and August was the chance to participate in the work placement programme.
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Dear Sir, I am writing this letter to express my sheer disappointment with the news that the work placement programme has been cancelled this summer. One of the main reasons I chose to study Business English at your school in July and August was the chance to participate in the work placement programme.