Advances in technology and automation have reduced the need for manual labour. Therefore working hours in offices and factories should be reduced. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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A group of people assert that offices should decrease the working hours for employees since automation and technological advancement enable employees to do more work in less time. I agree with this view and will support it in the following paragraphs.