Art and music are considered some of the fundamental elements of all societies, and some suggest that children should learn them at school. Do you think art and music still have a place in today’s modern world of technology? Should children spend more time learning art and music at school?

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In today’s rapidly evolving world, where technology dominates many aspects of life, the value of traditional subjects like art and music is sometimes questioned. However, I believe that these subjects continue to play a vital role in the development of children and should remain an integral part of the school curriculum.