Art and music are considered some of the fundamental elements of all societies, and some suggest that children should learn them at school. Do you think art and music still have a place in today’s modern world of technology? Should children spend more time learning art and music at school?

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Art and music are pivotal facets of cultural expression and creativity, and they are often regarded as the rudimentary elements of society. In my opinion, they are still indispensable in today's technology-driven world, and despite the pervasive influence of technology, nurturing artistic and musical skills in children in schools should be encouraged.