Some people believe that people should be allowed to work only till a set retirement age. Others say that if people want to work, age should not be a barrier to them. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
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Whether individuals should be permitted to work beyond a fixed retirement age is often debatable. While some believe that people should be free to continue working as long as they are willing and able, others argue that a set retirement age should be enforced.
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In today's society, opinions diverge regarding the appropriate retirement age for workers. While some advocate for a set retirement age for everyone, others believe that individuals who wish to continue working should not be impeded by age restrictions.