Discussion Essay

Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters (such as food, clothes and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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    How much freedom a child should be granted on everyday matters is controversial. People who are against allowing boundless liberty to children believe it creates selfish individuals.

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    In today's society, the role of children in decision-making is a topic of hot debate. While some argue that giving children the freedom to make choices on everyday matters can lead to self-centeredness, others believe it is essential for their development.

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