Opinion Essay

Many people believe that social networking sites such as Facebook have huge negative effects on society and individuals. Do you agree or disagree?

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    Today’s in a modern-driven world where human contact is so fast and quickly seems real because of ample advancement in technology. Numerous social sites are becoming popular among youngsters.

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    In the modern era, the world has encountered numerous growth of social networking sites users. One part of the society believes that it will have a positive impact, whereas others believe that it might be turned into detrimental effects on society.

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