Some believe success in life comes from hard work, dedication, and motivation. While many believe success depends on other important factors like money and appearance. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

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Success is often attributed to personal qualities such as hard work, dedication, and motivation. However, many argue that external factors, including wealth, social connections, and appearance, play a more decisive role in determining one's achievements.