Opinion Essay

Some people believe women are better leaders than men. To which extent do you agree or disagree?

Write this task

2 Corrections

Band

  1. Band 7.0
    Task Response
    Band 7.0
    Coherence and Cohesion
    Band 7.0
    Lexical Resource
    Band 6.5
    Grammatical Range and Accuracy
    Band 6.5

    In contemporary society, there is an increasingly popularised opinion that women are more suitable for positions of leadership rather than their male counterparts. During the course of this essay, I would analyse this perspective objectively before drawing a rational conclusion.

    View annotated correction
  2. Band 6.0
    Task Response
    Band 6.0
    Coherence and Cohesion
    Band 6.0
    Lexical Resource
    Band 6.0
    Grammatical Range and Accuracy
    Band 6.0

    Some people, nowadays, generally claim that females are good at taking up leadership positions as opposed to males. In my opinion, I partially concur with this point of view because both sexes have what they do better in terms of being in charge, as will be discussed in this essay.

    View annotated correction