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Positive or Negative Development Essay

An increased number of people today change their career and living places in their lives. Is it a positive or negative development?

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    With more and more technological advancement, the world is becoming smaller day by day. Modern means of transportation and communication have enabled the business organisations to become global.

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    People switch career paths and move to different places for various reasons ranging from better prospects, high earnings to the better quality of life. In many instances, this has many positive impacts on family or community of a person.

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    "Change is the essence of the life ". I feel that in today's competitive world, one should be professional in multidisciplinary fields to survive.

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