Opinion Essay

Modern lifestyles mean that many parents have little time for their children. Many children suffer because they don’t get as much attention from their parents as children did in the past. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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    It is well-known fact that the level of depression and anti-social behavior in kids has increased dramatically in modern societies. New lifestyles mean that more caretakers have little time for their children.

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    In the contemporary world, majority guardian finds difficulty to spend time with their offspring. It is believed that children have to face such a phase of life as they don’t get much attention from the parents as compared to past days.

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