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Nowadays, people always throw old things away and buy new things, whereas in the past, old things were repaired and used again. What factors cause this phenomenon? What effects does the phenomenon lead to?

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    In today’s world, consumer behavior has undergone a significant transformation, marked by a growing tendency to discard old possessions and pursue new acquisitions. This trend diverges sharply from past practices, which prioritized repair and reuse.

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    Nowadays, it has become prevalent to witness individuals opting to purchase entirely new items rather than repairing slightly defective ones. This shift is primarily attributed to the increased affluence of people in contemporary society, coupled with the constant stream of innovations.

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