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It is observed in many countries that less and less people nowadays go to the cinema to watch movies. What could be the possible cause and solution of this?

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  1. Band 6.0
    Task Response
    Band 7.0
    Coherence and Cohesion
    Band 6.0
    Lexical Resource
    Band 5.5
    Grammatical Range and Accuracy
    Band 5.5

    In today's modern era, cinema is playing a significant role. It is an important way to spread messages to the public and it also acts as a source of entertainment nowadays.

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  2. Band 7.0
    Task Response
    Band 7.0
    Coherence and Cohesion
    Band 6.5
    Lexical Resource
    Band 6.5
    Grammatical Range and Accuracy
    Band 7.0

    It is true that cinemas have not been attracting much public these days. There could be several reasons for this trend and to change this it is necessary to take some measures to make cinemas attractive again.

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  3. Band 6.5
    Task Response
    Band 7.0
    Coherence and Cohesion
    Band 7.0
    Lexical Resource
    Band 6.0
    Grammatical Range and Accuracy
    Band 6.0

    Many countries have recently observed that there is a declining trend in the number of people watch movies in the cinema. This essay will discuss possible reasons for the declination of movie viewers as well as some solutions to address this issue.

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