It is reported that many criminals commit crime again when they are released from prison. What are the causes and how can we solve this problem?
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The phenomenon that a number of criminals violate laws again when they are free from prison has sparked an intense debate among the general public. This can be attributed to many factors, including social discrimination in employment and the influence of other criminals in the prison.
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It is true that many prisoners do bad things again after they get out of prision. This problem is very bad for our society, many people feel unsafe.