Opinion Essay

Some people think that good health is a basic human need, so the medical service should not be run by profit-making companies. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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    In contemporary society, the provision of medical services plays a pivotal role in addressing the fundamental human need for good health. However, there is an ongoing debate regarding the involvement of profit-making companies in running medical services.

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    Good healthcare service is a fundamental need for every citizen in a country. But when this sector is run by money-making private organisations, they become too expensive for the poor and the middle class.

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