Discussion Essay

Some people think that the main benefit of international cooperation is in the protection of the environment, while others believe that businesses mainly benefit. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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    International cooperation has become increasingly vital in today’s interconnected world. While some argue that its primary benefit lies in environmental protection, others believe that businesses reap the greatest rewards.

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    Many today argue that international collaboration mainly serves to benefit businesses while others feel there are greater advantages overall for the environment. I would side with the former viewpoint due to the concrete and tangible outcomes.

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