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Opinion Essay

Is it wise for an industry to replace its experienced but old workers with new and young individuals who have less experience? Give your views in not less than 250 words.

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  1. Band 7.0
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    Band 7.0
    Coherence and Cohesion
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    Band 6.5
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    Band 6.5

    It is true that a recent trend of replacing the experienced old workers with young talents has cropped up in every industry. In my opinion, not all the old workers should be replaced by young individuals.

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  2. Band 6.0
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    Having an efficient workforce has always been one of the most complicated issues faced by industries and companies all around the world. Thus, it is quite controversial whether older experienced workers should be substituted with younger ones.

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