Advantages and Disadvantages Essay

Many people work long hours, leaving very little time for leisure activities. Does this situation have more advantages or more disadvantages?

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    [it has more disadvantages than advantages] In the contemporary world, a large number of individuals work for long hours, leaving them with little to no time for leisure activities.

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    [it has more demerits than merits] Working long hours has become a common practice in modern times, where individuals dedicate most of their time to their jobs and work, leaving minimal leisure time.

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