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Advantages and Disadvantages Essay

Many people work long hours, leaving very little time for leisure activities. Does this situation have more advantages or more disadvantages?

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  1. Band 7.0
    Task Response
    Band 7.0
    Coherence and Cohesion
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    Lexical Resource
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    Grammatical Range and Accuracy
    Band 7.0

    In the modern world, working longer hours is becoming prevalent, especially among younger people who often lack free time for various reasons. While there may be some positive aspects to this situation, a number of drawbacks could be listed and both will be covered in this essay.

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  2. Band 7.0
    Task Response
    Band 7.0
    Coherence and Cohesion
    Band 7.0
    Lexical Resource
    Band 7.0
    Grammatical Range and Accuracy
    Band 7.0

    Working long hours has become a common practice in modern times, where individuals dedicate most of their time to their jobs and work, leaving minimal leisure time. In this essay, I will explore both the advantages and demerits associated with this.

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