Nowadays environmental problems are too big to be managed by individual persons or individual countries. In other words, it is an international problem. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Sample Response
In recent yearsLately, many meetingspresentations, conferences and international summits are held to deal with waste treatment, recycling, and soil and water contamination. CertainlyFor sure cooperation and coordinationjoint efforts and consolidation can only help in the shared fight againstmutual war towards the ongoing environmental disaster. For instance, governments should offer support to companies and organizations involvedorganizations, involved in manufacturing, industry or agriculture in order to find environment-friendly approaches. These could be specific legal regulationsspecial law regulations, recycling programs, traininghelping courses in order to obtain ISO certificationimplement ISO certificates among other measuresand many more.
However, the influence of individuals on the environmentindividuals over environment should not be ignored. If we do not recognizeconfess that our planet is our home, we will never be able to take adequateadequately care of it. We have to contribute every day to the preservation of nature and the environmentnature and environment. For example, always remember to save energy by switching off lamps, computers and everything that we do not use. Our next obligation is to separate waste and dispose of bulky wastethrow bulk only in the designated areas. Driving vehicles can also be environmentallyenvironment friendly. For example, we have to avoid accelerating vehiclesaccelerating the engines too rapidly or using the air conditioning in the countrysidecountry, where it would be better to save energy and simply open the windows.
To sum up, environmental problems should be handled by local and international authorities as well as individuals. Every single person should take care of the environment, moreover we have to bring up our children to be conscious citizens of a clean and preserved planet.
This is a very good essay, a Band 7+ candidate. The structure of this essay and sentences is correct as well as the spelling and punctuation. Good job!
Why this response received Band 6.0
The response is strongest when it gives practical examples of how individuals can reduce their environmental impact and ultimately presents a sensible shared-responsibility position. The argument is weakened by an initially implicit stance, limited explanation of why international action is essential, and an irrelevant self-evaluative final paragraph. State the degree of agreement at the outset and develop the relationship between coordinated policy and individual action more analytically.
IELTS Writing Criteria Scores
Task Response
Both international cooperation and individual responsibility are addressed, but the degree of agreement emerges late and several ideas remain general.
Give a direct thesis in the introduction and explain why specific environmental problems require cross-border action beyond individual efforts.
Coherence and Cohesion
The main ideas follow a broadly logical sequence, though the opening lacks clear framing and the appended self-assessment disrupts the essay's unity.
Use a conventional introduction and remove the unrelated evaluative paragraph so each paragraph advances the central argument.
Lexical Resource
The vocabulary is adequate for the topic and includes some less common items, but inaccurate collocations occur regularly.
Replace expressions such as 'mutual war towards,' 'helping courses,' and 'throw bulk' with precise, natural environmental vocabulary.
Grammatical Range and Accuracy
A mix of simple and complex sentences communicates the main meaning, despite recurring article, preposition, word-order, and punctuation errors.
Focus on accurate clause boundaries and prepositional patterns, especially in sentences containing examples or additional points.
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IELTS Writing Task 2
Nowadays environmental problems are too big to be managed by individual persons or individual countries. In other words, it is an international problem. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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