Some people believe that women should play an equal role as men in a country’s police force or military force, such as the army, while others think women are not suitable for these kinds of jobs. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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While some opine that females are equally adept as men in playing important roles in a country's police or defence force, others beg to disagree. This essay will discuss both views and opine that the roles of women in these sectors are definitely crucial and they are no less qualified than men in performing their duties.