The best way to make society happier is to ensure that the richest and poorest people have the smallest differences in earnings. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Some people believe that the most effective way to improve social welfare is to narrow the income gap between richest people and poorest people. Although this view has some good points, such as increasing poor people's income and their life quality, I still disagree that idea because this view will lower people's incentive to work hard and may decline social well-being.