Discipline is an ever-increasing problem in modern schools. Some people think that discipline should be the responsibility of teachers, while others think that this is the role of parents. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.

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Band 7.5

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Band 7.5

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Band 8.0

In recent years, discipline has emerged as a significant problem in modern schools, and there is debate over whether teachers or parents should be primarily responsible for managing it. While both parties have important roles, I believe that teachers have a more immediate impact in shaping students’ behavior during school hours.