Some people think that competition at work, at school and in daily life is a good thing. Others believe that we should try to cooperate more, rather than competing against each other. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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From my opinion, I believe competition is major part of our society and it is important for growth and that is the reason of considering a challenges as a good thing. However, A significant number of people believe that we should try to cooperate more, rather then competing against each other.