Some people think women should be allowed to join the army, the navy and the air force just like men. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Task Response

Band 6.0

Coherence and Cohesion

Band 6.0

Lexical Resource

Band 6.0

Grammatical Range and Accuracy

Band 5.5

Since the dawn of the time, women have been playing a crucial role in the civilisation and development of mankind. It is clear that women can play a vital role in various defence forces so the writer of this statement thinks that they are a blessing for their country.