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The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050.

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    The supplied pie charts depict populations of different ages in Yemen and Italy in 2000 and give predictions for 2050 based on people’s age. In general, both countries, Yemen and Italy, are forecasted to have adolescent and adult as the vast majority of populations in 2050.

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    The charts illustrate the proportion of people of different ages in 2000 in two countries: Yemen and Italy and also forecast the data for the year 2050. According to the charts, the main age of the population in Yemen will change from people below 15 years old to those between 15 and 59 years old.

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