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The diagram gives information about the process of making carbonated drinks.

雅思学术类 Task 1 流程图，主题为 Making Carbonated Drinks。
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    The diagram provides a breakdown of how carbonated drinks are produced. Overall, the production of carbonated drinks involves raw water undergoing five distinct stages at which the water is cleaned, carbonated, mixed with other ingredients, packaged and eventually delivered to the general public.

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    The diagram shows the stages involved in the production of soft drink. Overall, there are 5 stages in the process, beginning with preparing the water for the drinks, and culminating with the packaging and delivery of the finished product.

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