流程图

The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane.

雅思学术类 Task 1 流程图，主题为 Sugar Production from Sugar Cane。
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    Overall, a total of seven steps is seen from the production, including harvesting, crushing and separating. It is also evident that manufacturing sugar from sugar canes is a capital-intensive process, despite using only one ingredient.

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    The diagram illustrates how sugar is produced from sugar cans. As clearly can be seen, there are seven various stages in this process demanding specific machinery and skilled workers.

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