You celebrated your birthday with some friends last week in a restaurant. It was a great success and you and your friends enjoyed the evening very much. Write a letter to the restaurant. In your letter: - thank the restaurant for the successful evening - mention the food, service and atmosphere - suggest improvements that could make things better
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Dear Sir or Madam, I am one of your regular customers and celebrated my birthday at your restaurant last week. I would like to thank you for the wonderful hospitality and delicious food which made the ceremony worth enjoyable.
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Dear Sir or Madam, Last week, I along with a few of my friends enjoyed a dinner party at your restaurant to celebrate my 21st birthday. I am writing to thank you for the delightful evening that we had.
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Dear Sir or Madam, I have recently celebrated my birthday at your restaurant with my friends and that was a grand party. I am writing this letter to thank you for making it a successful and memorable event.
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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to say thanks for organising a wonderful birthday party for us. It was a great evening with fascinating arrangements and the credits go to you and your staff members.
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Dear Sir or Madam, I celebrated my 25th birthday at your restaurant on 9th May, and the event was a great success. I am writing because I want to thank you for that.
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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to thank you for your amazing service last Tuesday evening when I visited your restaurant with some of my friends to celebrate my 24th birthday. The interior was elegant and the tranquillity of the restaurant was mind-boggling.
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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to express my gratitude for the service you offered on 30th December when I visited your restaurant along with my friends to celebrate my birthday. It was one of the most memorable birthday events in my life and your staff made it even more special by offering a complimentary birthday cake.