You are going to study at a college in the UK next year. You would like to stay in the college Hall of Residence. Write a letter to the college. In your letter: - outline what your room needs are - outline what your food needs are - ask what alternatives are available if the college cannot provide what you want
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Dear Sir or Madam, I have recently enrolled in your college and my class will commence at the beginning of next year. I am writing to request you to arrange my accommodation in the college hostel or suggest an alternative.
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Dear Sir or Madam, I have recently been granted admission to your college and would be joining my classes in the next academic year. At this juncture, I would like to put forward my accommodation requirements during my period of study at your college as I am willing to stay at the college Hall of Residence.