You are going to study at a college in the UK next year. You would like to stay in the college Hall of Residence. Write a letter to the college. In your letter: - outline what your room needs are - outline what your food needs are - ask what alternatives are available if the college cannot provide what you want
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Dear Sir or Madam, I have recently been granted admission to your college in the Physics department, and I am writing with respect to my accommodation requirements in the college residence hall. I am a female student from Ireland and would be travelling to the UK for the first time.
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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter to inform you that I have recently got admitted to your college and my class will begin next January. And for that, I want to reserve my accommodation in your college Hall of Residence before I reach the United Kingdom to join my class.
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Dear Sir or Madam, I have been accepted into the MBA course for the next academic year in your prestigious college. I am writing to inquire about suitable accommodation in the college Hall of Residence as I want to reserve it before I travel to the UK to join my classes.