首页雅思 G 类 Task 1 范文Live-In Childcare Job Application

You have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine for someone to live with a family for six months and look after their six-year-old child. Write a letter to the parents. In your letter: - explain why you would like the job - give details of why you would be a suitable person to employ - say how you would spend your free time while you are in Australia

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Dear Mrs. Scott, I am writing in response to the advertisement in the Australian magazine, inviting someone to live with your family for six months and care for your six-year-old child.
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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter in response to an advertisement, published last week in one of the leading Australian family magazines, where you asked for a short term live-in caregiver for your six-year-old child. I have proper experiences to take the best care of your child, and I would like to take the job.
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