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Fashion trends are difficult to follow these days and it’s widely believed that they primarily exist just to sell clothes. Some people believe that we shouldn’t follow them and that we should dress in what we like and feel comfortable in. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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  1. 7.0分
    任务回应
    7.0分
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    7.0分
    词汇资源
    6.5分
    语法范围与准确性
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    During the early days of civilisation, clothing was nothing more than a simple need of every human being. All they ever needed was a piece of clothing to cover and protect themselves from the harsh weather the Mother Nature had to offer.

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  2. 7.0分
    任务回应
    7.0分
    连贯与衔接
    6.0分
    词汇资源
    7.0分
    语法范围与准确性
    7.0分

    It’s widely believed in today’s materialistic world that the latest innovative fashion trends hold great significance. On the other hand, such trends are believed to be set only in the pursuit of profits for large designer companies.

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